April 30th, 2007 at 01:41pm
this is great.. it had great flow, and it describes a feeling that almost everyone has at some point.
uhm.. yeah, just wow...
it kinda felt nice reading it, because right now it felt like it's something i would have written...
wicked job.
*huggles*
I loved the bottom lines! You always end your poems so darn freaking good *lol*