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  • Valium Freak

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    Yeah t is just one big ramble actually it has a tune on my head but yeah
    August 22nd, 2008 at 02:59pm
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    Hey, I could be reading this wrong, but it feels like you're rambling on too much and don't need this many words to say what you mean. On the plus side, there are a few lines and phrases that I think are really cool. The most notable being "Blue eyes will catch the flu of thousand years ago."
    August 22nd, 2008 at 05:25am
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