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  • Slaying the Dreamer

    Slaying the Dreamer (105)

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    I loved this. You did a great job writing it. :)
    January 9th, 2009 at 09:34am
  • chanellelikerawr

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    i love the lines "i want to be the death, i can take you with me"
    August 22nd, 2008 at 05:12am
  • Dark Magical Dreams

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    aww its cute and i luv it my fav part is
    " forever dead and no one else around
    I need another wing
    I can't fly with my left black wing"
    July 31st, 2008 at 03:08am
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