Beneath My Skin - Comments

  • ignorance.

    ignorance. (100)

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    great poem
    August 19th, 2008 at 05:33pm
  • H0rse0nCrack

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    Completly amazing.
    Freaking brilliant, mann. :]
    A few mistakes in grammer, I notice,
    but it's just me for them to stand out a lot.
    But I know what you meant.
    but like I said,
    completly brilliant!
    August 7th, 2008 at 12:42am
  • Atsushi Sakurai.

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    I thought it was pretty good, minus the words you miss used. I also love the ending of the poem. I wasn't expecting that. Continue with your poetry, you have potential.
    August 2nd, 2008 at 02:28am
  • electrolitebrite

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    I want to leave a comment equivalent to the poem, but I really can't. This is really great.
    August 1st, 2008 at 08:54pm
  • Still Ill

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    Damn Kyle.
    You're a great poet bby. <3
    Really.
    July 31st, 2008 at 11:31am
  • emunahberurah

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    Wow.. This is amazing.. and I'm not just saying it.
    July 31st, 2008 at 10:32am
  • LearningToLove

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    wow this is really good! You have a very creative mind!
    July 30th, 2008 at 06:40pm
  • IxPulledxThexTrigger

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    I really like this. A couple spelling errors though.
    July 30th, 2008 at 06:26pm
  • Stop_The_Song!

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    wow i can realate... trying to hide in something ur not and all u want is someone to realize its not u and try to get u to show who u really are
    July 30th, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • NathanL.ovesME

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    This is really good. I like it, but you should capitalize the 'i's.
    July 30th, 2008 at 05:38pm