OH MY GOTH!!! I thought this poem was [i][b]BEAUTIFUL!!![/i][/b]
You should really get your poems collected and form them into a book to publish! I would buy the book and recommend it to everyone I know!
I especailly love the first two stanzas! They were awesome! "Your making my bllod boil/When all you do is yelp", these are some words in the second stanza that I like because its something that relates to me when little spoiled children take over my house and annoy me.
Another great poem from you kim, I truly belive you have natural talent!!!!
You should really get your poems collected and form them into a book to publish! I would buy the book and recommend it to everyone I know!
I especailly love the first two stanzas! They were awesome! "Your making my bllod boil/When all you do is yelp", these are some words in the second stanza that I like because its something that relates to me when little spoiled children take over my house and annoy me.
Another great poem from you kim, I truly belive you have natural talent!!!!