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  • zillaidma

    zillaidma (100)

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    Whoa! Shocked:
    That...was....amazing!!!!....AHHHH!!!! *squeals akwardly into happiness!!*
    I love the first three lines of the first stanza, i loved the " I/FEEL/NOTHING/BUT/PITTY/FOR/YOU" and i especailly loved!!!! the ending of it!!!!

    great poem!!!! ^u^
    August 6th, 2008 at 10:18pm
  • Darker-tears17

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    0.0 that....was....AWSOME...so....in your face
    August 4th, 2008 at 07:42am
  • Taste Me. Feed Me.

    Taste Me. Feed Me. (100)

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    damn! and to think i was just beginning to fall for you and you drop this bomb on me...lol. i loved it em.
    August 4th, 2008 at 05:50am
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