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  • twisted.

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    wow.. I like it...
    December 21st, 2009 at 04:18am
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    Wow...
    nuff sed
    March 22nd, 2009 at 03:57am
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    This is really great, the darkness really translates to the reader and you didn't waver with the morbid style which makes it even better.

    The third verse's syllables are a little questionable, also because the first two verses have such great rhythm.

    I like it how you didn't capitalize the word 'I'.
    January 18th, 2008 at 08:04am
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