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wow.. I like it...
December 21st, 2009 at 04:18am
Zoe.Roses.
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Wow...
nuff sed
March 22nd, 2009 at 03:57am
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This is really great, the darkness really translates to the reader and you didn't waver with the morbid style which makes it even better.
The third verse's syllables are a little questionable, also because the first two verses have such great rhythm.
I like it how you didn't capitalize the word 'I'.
January 18th, 2008 at 08:04am
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