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Hilaryduffgta (100)

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hey wonderful poem please add me as a friend

August 13th, 2008 at 11:25pm
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i really like this. it reminds me of a book i read about vampires

[no not the twilight saga lol]

thanks for the comment
you got a gift yourself

August 13th, 2008 at 05:49am
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i loved this poem. it was intense and it made me think a lot

August 11th, 2008 at 03:53am
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cool poem. I like some of the metaphors in this but it's a bit too over the top for my taste.

oh, btw, I think you mean soar in line 4.

August 10th, 2008 at 03:42am

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