great poem there it is really strong one but great job
August 28th, 2007 at 10:42pm
see rori? i told you it didn`t suck
and i was right as always ( i`m kidding i`m not always right andy way i told ya
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July 18th, 2007 at 01:45am
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thanksMay 22nd, 2007 at 07:51pm
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OMGijz I love it rori!
it doesn't suck
better then mine.believe me
keep it up
I lurv itMay 5th, 2007 at 10:10pm -
nice i like it
its very nice and cool and full of sentiment .May 4th, 2007 at 03:17pm -
thanks i thought it suckedMay 2nd, 2007 at 02:51pm
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very nice. I really liked it. Keep up the good work.May 1st, 2007 at 04:01pm
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its very good.
suprising how deep it is for a rhyming poem, which is a good thingMay 1st, 2007 at 01:51pm -
I really liked it
very deep and meaningful
May 1st, 2007 at 01:22pm
