Terrifying - Comments

Wow...I decided to randomly read this.
It was amazing...brilliant! I can't believe i never read this before i should have ages ago at a time when i had nothin to do. It was a really good poem though it was slightly hard to read cause of the stanza endings as the first person commented....but otherwise it is truly heart-wrenching.

wow that was....amazing.*tear* you are a poet and a damn good one i think i like this better then Fire and Ice *and thats a big compliment my friend*

I think the actual words in the poem are good because it's an identifiable thought process, but the way the stanzas are broken up doesn't make sense to me. it seems so divided that it hinders the reader.