Puppet Girl - Comments

fen'harel (560)

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I liked how you wrote this!!! And you say you hate dialogues!!! haha this is kind of a dialogue, but this one didn't loose its poetic device!

August 28th, 2008 at 11:45pm

ChloeBarrett (100)

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ooh la la i like that =]

August 27th, 2008 at 01:06am

Brandi-Dandi (100)

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I really liked it.
My favorite line would be 'a voice without a name'
I don't know why, but I really like that like.
And how ironic is it that a few days ago I was thinking about writing something about being a puppet :D

August 26th, 2008 at 02:25am

hockeyLOVE. (100)

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this is really good! i like it!

August 23rd, 2008 at 08:17pm