I love just walking in the rain'
This is a great poem but it just feels lke its messing something
You dont have to follow my advice, dont let people change the way you imagined your writing.
Otherwise i really enjoyed it.
The rhymes were good, and it was really descrpitve
Brava, Keep Writing
Sincerely Celly, the fairy of mibba *+wink*+
wow... I totally 100% agree with crystal2bear. Rain usually give me inspiration or it just makes me want to curl up on the couch and watch all the old classical black and white movies. The next time a rainy day is going to be around though, I'll come back here and read this again. I mean, you captured everything perfectly!
I am a rain person, it widens my senses and spark creativeness...that or lazyness watching old movies. I love this poem, short simple, straight to the point and captures the moment.
I love rain, and I love this poem
I love the soothing sound when the raindrops hit my window..
Rain rocks, and so does this poem Haha :) Good one! Keep it up