This is great. Short simple and yet it holds its own. One thing I picked out though is that you have a line that reads: "Before I go tell me that you love me" I believe there should be a comma between "go" and "tell". Also at the end instead of "if I will die" I think it would sound more final if it was changed to "when I will die". Besides that it is very well written.
- Crayon Eater