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  • Maxxie?

    Maxxie? (100)

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    Your Twatty poem is Guuudd!
    Iz loving it XD
    September 8th, 2008 at 08:06pm
  • Glassified

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    I love your poem!

    Very imaganitive ^_^

    You have to sing it to me one time ^_-

    love you!

    Gems x
    September 6th, 2008 at 07:14pm
  • MissMagnoliaWebber

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    I very like how you intertwined all the fairy tales, though I strongly disagree with your pessimistic attitude towards waiting for Prince Charming-- then again I'm the greatest romantic you'll ever meet. You have a very nice voice for poetry-- try developing a rhyme scheme and sense of metre. Good luck and keep writing.
    ~Maggie
    September 5th, 2008 at 01:33am
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