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  • wordxrecycler

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    'They wanted to desecrate your beautiful body,
    To carve their guilt in your flesh'

    'The knife they twisted in your back bled on my skin'

    those two verses were my favorites, by far.

    I also enjoyed stanza 5 =)

    and, overall, this was a very compelling poem.
    I couldn't stop reading!
    September 10th, 2008 at 02:11am
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