i liked it and it really did have emotion in it...blind hatred Is an emotion its great you have TALENT dont ever get told diffrent(i sound all moral and shit lol)
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This is really good, I've been meaning to write a poem about this and these words are so true, delivered with effect...um....just for the record; not ALL poetry has to have an ensemble of emotions, blind hatred is fine on it's own dear...
i dont think you put enough emotion into this poem. poetry should be filled with pation, anger, sadness, happiness, and brutalness. this poem only had anger and hate. other then that it was ok not very good no offence