Beautimus poem my friend.
June 8th, 2009 at 06:43am
It has a nice feel to it, just be careful of your grammer and spelling (yes they are a pain but it makes it so much better if the reader doesn't have to stop and think about your mistakes) Also I think it could use a bit more detail as to why it is called "unspoken" I think I understand what you're trying to say by that but yet you might want to clarify a little.
- Crayon Eater