I agree with the person below me, I just love how you use the word midnight twice at that one part. This poem is a little shorter than your others, but I think it's really good that way. It gets the message across simply, but also with a deep undercurrent of some foreign emotion. It's hard to describe but I like how the poem revolves around only one thing or catagory (NOT genre...) and how it makes the description much more intense, but yet it still manages to be laid back as you read it. I wouldn't say this one could be a story, but it could definitely be a picture. A totally awesome and epic picture taken most likely in the dark, haha.
March 13th, 2010 at 04:54pm
