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  • HiYaLLo!

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    Love it ^.^
    August 24th, 2011 at 04:26pm
  • CCisamazing12345

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    I love this poem!! :) awesome job!
    February 26th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • Jackasaurus Rex

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    Ha! I like the sense of humor in this piece. Good job of it.
    September 23rd, 2010 at 05:25am
  • ViLola

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    Seriously, i just got chills... Very nice job.
    November 19th, 2009 at 03:23am
  • the asphyxiation.

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    niiicce. real suave.
    July 29th, 2009 at 08:56pm
  • InadequateOctopus

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    I adored it. :)
    Its cryptic.. so I am not positive of the exact topic and that's part of the reason why I liked it- It can be interpreted in any way the reader wants to read it.
    "Make a sound, tap my shoulder,
    make the room much much colder."
    was my favorite part... I am not sure why.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 10:29pm