Love turns into Darkness - Comments

With Love (100)

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so sad!=( u really r an amazing writer Baby!
xoxo

June 24th, 2009 at 02:56am

poison ivy (100)

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:( tis so sad, no how u feel though.

January 1st, 2009 at 10:51pm

WildGirl (100)

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Dude, I got teary eyed. It's a great poem. =]

October 5th, 2008 at 10:41am

Rescue Me (100)

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this was great!

October 5th, 2008 at 04:27am

last time (100)

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Watch out for "reflections" and "meant". Otherwise this was interesting. Like the imagery and the length was just right for this piece. The flow was a little off near the end but not very noticeable.

October 5th, 2008 at 02:56am

Jelly Tots (100)

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Short, sweet yet meaningful.
Your an amazing writer, keep it up

October 5th, 2008 at 12:17am