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  • tron

    tron (100)

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    Good read, I just think lines 6-10 could flow better; the rest of the poem does.
    October 14th, 2008 at 03:50am
  • chanellelikerawr

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    the pen is mightier than the sword they say
    this was great!!
    October 11th, 2008 at 05:48am
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