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  • rockinrose

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    DUDE, THAT ROCKED!
    seriously, awesome poem...
    For some reason, this doesnt make sense to me
    'Hidden away my feelings are' I think...It should be
    hiding away what my feelings are.
    ROCK ON! KEEP IT UP! x-x-x
    April 16th, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • littlerockstar

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    wow! thats amazing.
    October 25th, 2008 at 12:28pm
  • kurT.

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    ^_^
    I like it.
    Tip: Bug told me once. Use more descriptive words. It makes the poem sort of flow better if you can imagine/relate to what the author is talking about.
    Other than that tis goood x]
    October 9th, 2008 at 06:50pm
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