On a Paper Airplane Over a Morphine Ocean - Comments

  • Stellaluna

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    oh my gosh, this one was way wicked... it just got better and better as I read more into the poem. The 4th and 5th stanzas are my absolute favorites.
    October 25th, 2008 at 03:51am
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    "... put in the IV bag of a monster/ we thought we'd slain long ago"

    Wow, fantastic poem. I'm on the verge of awe.
    October 13th, 2008 at 06:07am