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God Dammit!
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Oh I just read the about you section and that you said that your poetry are just expressions. Sorry
October 15th, 2008 at 01:42am
God Dammit!
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1st: Use your grammar. "I" is capitalized.
2nd: I get what you're saying, but I think you could use stronger language and use more imagery.
That's only MY opinion.
October 15th, 2008 at 01:41am
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