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  • likely lads

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    This was a bit choppy, and the flow was a bit strange at some times.

    Your word choice, though, is utter brilliance. I wasn't able to predict what was to come next and I feel that that's what poetry is about.
    June 22nd, 2007 at 09:49pm
  • CyanideandHappiness

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    O_O

    =D
    May 26th, 2007 at 02:58am
  • Sexie Pineapple xo

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    i really like this one. i can see your improvments since i first started reading yours. good job!! keep at it :)
    May 19th, 2007 at 04:25am
  • SilentlyxScreaming

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    you did an amazing job on this! *claps*
    May 19th, 2007 at 12:34am
  • lozzieee who.

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    aw wow this is brilliant! Clap
    May 19th, 2007 at 12:19am
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