Here it Came - Comments

likely lads (100)

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This was a bit choppy, and the flow was a bit strange at some times.

Your word choice, though, is utter brilliance. I wasn't able to predict what was to come next and I feel that that's what poetry is about.

June 22nd, 2007 at 09:49pm

CyanideandHappiness (100)

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O_O

=D

May 26th, 2007 at 02:58am

Sexie Pineapple xo (100)

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i really like this one. i can see your improvments since i first started reading yours. good job!! keep at it :)

May 19th, 2007 at 04:25am

SilentlyxScreaming (100)

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you did an amazing job on this! *claps*

May 19th, 2007 at 12:34am

lozzieee who. (610)

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aw wow this is brilliant!

May 19th, 2007 at 12:19am