Wow, I like this a lot.
It's almost like a story, or even a fairytale.
There's lots of wonderful desription and emotion you use as well.
And I like how the flute still played even after the girl died, very magical and mysterious that added to the eerie and wistful emotion I picked up from it.
Very lovely poem.
It's almost like a story, or even a fairytale.
There's lots of wonderful desription and emotion you use as well.
And I like how the flute still played even after the girl died, very magical and mysterious that added to the eerie and wistful emotion I picked up from it.
Very lovely poem.