Robot No. 3597 - Comments

nice hidden messege

I absoloutely love the line 'tell me who is made and who is real'.
because we are all made, yet some are real and some are not.

very insightful and meaningful, I love this.

wow. i'm kinda dumb; i don't quite understand this, but i know it's got some fabulous insightful meaning behind it, if only i could see it...
and i agree with tron, love how Lines was a single stanza with no end punctuation, and all the space you left at the end, like it was hanging in space.

the ending of this is really great. if nothing else that's bold to have that one word as a stanza. besides that, the lines "'True,' she said, though it was all a lie" and "Up he went and into the real world" are also really good.