His Kaleidoscope Eyes - Comments

Tashiekins (100)

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Thanks for the comment on my story, I really like this poem, beautifu imagery.
xxx

June 19th, 2009 at 07:15pm

graggyaustin (100)

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awww is it about josh

June 1st, 2009 at 09:47pm

Ironic death? (150)

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I love this line

spice and tints mix in his gaze
makes me melt in a confused haze

and the last two

They're just so ... [i]whoa[/i]
that I've run out of rhymes

great poem. =D

October 29th, 2008 at 09:39pm

Berytni (150)

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I love this!
Especially the last line
;P

October 29th, 2008 at 01:24am

Money Money (105)

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Last verse is the best.
Makes you chuckle

October 24th, 2008 at 12:00am

tron (100)

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Nice. The ending is so rad.

October 20th, 2008 at 05:15am