Blood on my mirror. - Comments

  • newagecarny

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    I think it's more like thoughts put together than poetry, you just go on and on without [i]actually[/i] saying anything.

    It's like a confession or a diary entry but it doesn't really have the elements a poem should have.
    July 18th, 2007 at 12:45am
  • Evil Genius

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    this is really good; lots and lots of emotion. keep it up!
    July 18th, 2007 at 12:33am
  • The Bronx.

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    I used to feel that way about myself, I isolated myself from everyone, I just wanted to be popular and have people like me, very sad, but I can relate.

    Bronx.
    June 14th, 2007 at 01:38am
  • AmandaAdenine

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    A little of both,
    Sometimes I hate myself and this is sometimes how I feel so yea.
    May 20th, 2007 at 04:30am
  • Sleepy Lullaby

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    That was sad... I enjoyed it, anyway. Good job. One question, if I may. Is this the way you feel about yourself, or is it your brilliant creativity being spilled upon paper (or both)?
    May 20th, 2007 at 04:00am