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  • Ferb Fletcher

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    This was indeed very beautiful and I greatly enjoyed the repetition of "And yet we wonder why/ They fight us" it was an excellent line to repeat, in my opinion.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 02:07am
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    wow, just...wow.
    January 4th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • Vinny.Vicious

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    This is amazing.
    You should submit this to a contest, it's beautifully written.
    November 7th, 2008 at 03:36am
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