A Rhyme for Butterflies - Comments

I really enjoyed the concept to this, i would say its fairly original, good poem

agreed this is a creative way to express urself:] but yeah this poen is great:] it ryhymes and plus it had an inside joke:]

we once had this cheesy moment where i said i wanted to write a song for him, but i couldn't find a rhyme for butterflies. now i've found one, and wrote this poem in one last, desperate bid to make him realise what we had.

:(

That's a creative way to express yourself. I'm sure it'd make more sense to me if I knew the inside joke, though...