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  • what the chipmunk?

    what the chipmunk? (100)

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    This reminds me of those kinda Victorian era poets, of which I've read a few bits and bobs... I'm not the biggest fan of that sort of stuff, but this is exceptional. I suppose it's because so often, when people try and pull it off (or sort of go along those lines)... they, er... fail a bit. But this poem has got it down to an... art (that sounds silly, poetry is an art, so I say... really, Lucy, how did ya work that one out? xP)

    But yeah, very good. I'm impressed. :-o
    January 13th, 2009 at 02:09pm
  • BigGiganticBlueSheep

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    O.o you are an awesome poet.
    November 20th, 2008 at 07:52am
  • sketch.

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    I think this is really good. I particularly enjoyed the imagery and the enthusiasm of it. I might just be a bit twisted, but it reminds me a little of necrophilia... was that intentional?
    November 15th, 2008 at 04:45pm
  • Devona

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    Wow, you really write brilliant poems. I wish I was half as good as you. Keep it up, we want more.
    November 15th, 2008 at 10:56am
  • drama xx love

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    amazing <3
    dontt stop writingg
    November 14th, 2008 at 10:31pm
  • Tom Fletcher.

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    This is spectacular. Kind of old fashioned and very sweet.
    Well done. :)
    November 14th, 2008 at 05:26pm
  • Scream.Whisper

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    I love this poem!
    You're an awesome poet!
    ^^
    November 13th, 2008 at 09:54am
  • vanete.

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    Wow! I'm not a poet, as you know, but that was impressive. I loved it. And after reading all of those Edgar Allan Poe's poetry last night, I can't help but be reminded of it. You are truly talented and I'm proud to have you as my sister.

    Never stop writing. <333
    November 12th, 2008 at 10:08pm