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Thank you. I think I agree, actually, I think the issue is the length, and it isn't properly... concluded? Yeah. I do want to finish it off properly, but I'll have to do that when I'm on more of a pessimistic/brooding/reflective mood.

I like it, actually.

To me, it's like a sarcastic look back at nights out, when hungover or on a bit of a downer or... hmm, yeah. However, I think it's too short. I dunno, maybe that's the point... and maybe it's not the ending that bothers me, but the fact that it feels incomplete somehow.

O.O this is AWESOME! i love the way youve used rhyming couplets. peace out xxxx

i think that the "no room to think" is a good ending
and if a poem can stir a feeling its a great poem
and all through this poem i couldnt stop think of two people i know,
its a great poem