I'm trying to think of one word that could sum up this poem.
Can't think of one. And I'm not going to call it beautiful. Like, twelve people already said that! For lack of a better word, I'm sure. Hmmm...
Breathtaking?
That's kind of two smootched into one. O.O
Oh well.
I really like your poems, they have a lot behind them,
rather than just pretty words like some people, you tell multiple stories within a paragraph, I have to read over it a few times to make sure I grasp the fullness of it,
but it's refreshing,
like a layered chocolate cake... or something...
Bad analogy, but you get the point... dangit, I'm hungry now...