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JCaulfield
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I like that one, and specially the last part:
I can't love you, never ever [b]Again[/b].
That's the key word, it gives the poem another meaning than the first one you get while reading, but once I got to that word, it changed the point of view.
February 5th, 2007 at 01:09am
Dogmom92
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dont eat me
i wont taste good
very good
bravio
January 28th, 2007 at 03:08am
GONEEEE
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sweet.
January 17th, 2007 at 12:02am
Alexithymia
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awesome ^_^
January 14th, 2007 at 06:01am
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very cool.
January 14th, 2007 at 05:04am
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I can't love you, never ever [b]Again[/b].
That's the key word, it gives the poem another meaning than the first one you get while reading, but once I got to that word, it changed the point of view.