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its supposed to be short :p
haikus are only 17 sylables, 5,7,5
thanx for the replys xD

November 24th, 2008 at 06:18pm
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Wow
so simple and so short
yet so awesome!
lol you're a good writer.

November 24th, 2008 at 03:05am
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ahh how did I know you'd be good at arty farty things like haikus :)

It's very good. I love the description in there, and how it ends, very simply but topping off the overall scene painted in your mind. xx

November 24th, 2008 at 01:05am

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