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  • excelsior

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    its supposed to be short :p
    haikus are only 17 sylables, 5,7,5
    thanx for the replys xD
    November 24th, 2008 at 06:18pm
  • DarlingDisaster

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    Wow
    so simple and so short
    yet so awesome!
    lol you're a good writer.
    November 24th, 2008 at 03:05am
  • sketch.

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    ahh how did I know you'd be good at arty farty things like haikus :)

    It's very good. I love the description in there, and how it ends, very simply but topping off the overall scene painted in your mind. xx
    November 24th, 2008 at 01:05am
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