Learning to love again. - Comments

Great poem.

This poem is so full of emotion it seems that even these words cannot express the sort of love they try to convey
But you can tell that when you read it so it's awesome because the words hold so much meaning and emotion it's like there's something else there, beyond the words
I really like this one because it's relatable... there are so many people I'd take a bullet for but I haven't even tried to write a poem like this because I've been afrid nothing I could ever say could express it
But you did very well taking that chance and it turned out nicely :)

I really like this.
Much emotion.
I loved how everything didn't ryhme the whole time.
Very beautiful peice of work.

I cannot stress how much I loved the opening stanza. It was amazing. The words simply melted together like snow, creating this pure amazingness not many people are able of.

I have no critisism.

Please leave a comment. I am looking for critisism. To make my poems better.