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  • LiSwtSLaS

    LiSwtSLaS (100)

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    I like the way you explained everything. Not only what you were feeling but what you saw and heard as well. I find it is easier to picture things when you cover more and more of the persons senses.

    - Crayon Eater
    December 5th, 2008 at 05:16am
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