Visions of the Leaves and Branches - Comments

  • Ferb Fletcher

    Ferb Fletcher (130)

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    A really touching poem. The rhythm is perfect for this structure. The imagery contained in the words is astounding, it really fits. It's really well-written and there's a lot of truth to the words; a lot of emotion as well. Wonderfully done!
    December 7th, 2009 at 07:26am
  • cosmic killer.

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    Wow. This is just so sad. I totally agree. War does not make peace. It solves nothing. This really touched me. Great job. =]
    December 7th, 2008 at 04:08am