This Is Death - Comments

dayum. amazing poem. one of the best i've ever read. Some poeple write poetry that rhymes and is descriptive but it doesnt make a whole lot of sense but yours really did. its descriptive and poetic and beautiful and I give you 2 thumbs wayyy up lol

"His mind lingers on her last breath" <---favorite part

Wow. And you were worried about putting this up? It's frickin' amazing!

wow...that is an amazing poem.

very deep.

and meaningful.