This Is Death - Comments

  • deathbatchick6661

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    dayum. amazing poem. one of the best i've ever read. Some poeple write poetry that rhymes and is descriptive but it doesnt make a whole lot of sense but yours really did. its descriptive and poetic and beautiful and I give you 2 thumbs wayyy up lol

    "His mind lingers on her last breath" <---favorite part
    December 14th, 2009 at 05:46am
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Wow. And you were worried about putting this up? It's frickin' amazing!
    December 12th, 2008 at 07:06am
  • neverbeenkissed

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    wow...that is an amazing poem.

    very deep.

    and meaningful.
    December 12th, 2008 at 07:04am