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Through Your Fires (100)

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great use of rhyme :)
again the idea of stories within poems is great :)
i love this ^^

September 5th, 2009 at 05:25am

not socially optimal (100)

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Hehe I loved this a lot. The story flowed so smoothly and you described really well. Plus I also loved your word choice.
Bravo :D

December 17th, 2008 at 06:10am

xXxMaggotxXx (100)

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wwoooww. I love it. nice twist. =).

December 16th, 2008 at 08:32pm

Sean Smith (100)

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Ooooh :weird

That was really awesome.
The thrid stanza onwards...*smirk*
You weren't kidding when you said it was a bit twisted.
I liked the back story.

Scarlet is amazing :tehe:

xx

December 16th, 2008 at 06:24pm