Sinful. - Comments

great use of rhyme :)
again the idea of stories within poems is great :)
i love this ^^

Hehe I loved this a lot. The story flowed so smoothly and you described really well. Plus I also loved your word choice.
Bravo :D

wwoooww. I love it. nice twist. =).

Ooooh :weird

That was really awesome.
The thrid stanza onwards...*smirk*
You weren't kidding when you said it was a bit twisted.
I liked the back story.

Scarlet is amazing :tehe:

xx