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Bee.Vee
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I like it a lot. Just from this poem I can tell that you are a great poet. The one thing I have for improvement is that it seems a little bit like you are going out of you way to make things rhyme. But over all very good poem!
Ps.
Will you read my new story?
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December 29th, 2008 at 10:06pm
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Will you read my new story?
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