Hurtfully Truthful - Comments

  • Antagonist

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    Kim, this one is so heart felt, and it just weeps feeling. It's amazing!
    January 29th, 2009 at 01:29am
  • zillaidma

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    Did you just change the title???
    @__@
    Or am I just plain crazy and need to be sent to a madhouse? XD (no, seriously, am i going crazy?)
    January 5th, 2009 at 06:56am
  • zillaidma

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    [i]Words as careful as poets'[/i] I thought that little line was lovely ^u^
    And I really think the first stanza is a perfect intro :D
    I loved the second stanza, it explains how i would feel at times, but it has no relations for me being a liar. Its just the parts of my life that seem to collapse at one end.
    Great poems *kisses it*
    January 1st, 2009 at 07:42am