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  • Cheezheister

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    Meh heh heh. Thanks a bunch. horsie890, I shall fix those. And Behind Closed Doors, yes I did. I didn't think it was that great, but who am I to judge XD
    June 12th, 2007 at 06:50am
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    Wow, that was deep, and I have no emotions so that's alot comming from me. Did you write this yourself?
    June 12th, 2007 at 01:37am
  • horsie890

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    Allow me to go Grammar Nazi for a moment.

    Obliterate is spelled...well, exactly like that.

    You forgot to capitalize a few names, Maim was one, I don't remember if there were more...

    Forever more should be separate...again, exactly like that.

    *is done GNing*

    I love it. Again. It's very interesting, espcially since Kill has died...
    June 12th, 2007 at 12:17am
  • Cheezheister

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    Yeah. This was actually a school thing. We had to write an epitaph of an overused word and swear never to use it again -_-

    Still, I liked the outcome. COMMENT PLEASE!
    June 11th, 2007 at 10:35pm
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