Epitaph of Kill - Comments

Meh heh heh. Thanks a bunch. horsie890, I shall fix those. And Behind Closed Doors, yes I did. I didn't think it was that great, but who am I to judge XD

Wow, that was deep, and I have no emotions so that's alot comming from me. Did you write this yourself?

Allow me to go Grammar Nazi for a moment.

Obliterate is spelled...well, exactly like that.

You forgot to capitalize a few names, Maim was one, I don't remember if there were more...

Forever more should be separate...again, exactly like that.

*is done GNing*

I love it. Again. It's very interesting, espcially since Kill has died...

Yeah. This was actually a school thing. We had to write an epitaph of an overused word and swear never to use it again -_-

Still, I liked the outcome. COMMENT PLEASE!